I'm so proud of my girl. Allison's school participates in a competition called "Gathering of the Talents" sponsored by Concordia University, Seward, Nebraska. Students from Lutheran schools from a 4- or 5-state surrounding area compete in divisions such as Creative Writing, Art, Dance, Singing, Dance, etc. There were approximately 1,600 or so total entries by students. Allison's school had approximately 36 entries. The work and performances are judged and given a blue, pink or yellow standing. The blues are then judged again, and the top are given purple awards...kinda like highly distinguished award.
All of the entries are purely voluntary and I believe worked on or completed out of the school setting for the most part. I know, for example, some of the art projects were done in school, but for the most part this is an out of school, independent entry process. I entered Allison in the Creative Writing and the Art categories. Basically, she needed to dictate a story to me, and I had to type it for her, and then for the art it was basically just to draw a picture. When they get older they can do 3-D art projects, as well as participate in dance and music.
Below I have pasted Allison's Creative Writing story. She 'wrote' the entire thing by herself. I did not lead her or prompt her on any of the content. I then just typed up the content. For several days prior we talked about beginning, middle, and end, story structure, having her keep in mind the books and stories that we read here at home, how they are structured, etc. Otherwise, she wrote her own story.
Allison received one of three purple awards received by students at Allison's school. Elizabeth L. received the other two, one for her Creative Writing and one for her art project. This is the photo that was the town newspaper. I am so very proud of Allison!
Emily, Henry, & the Catnippers
Allison Dierking
Kindergarten
Good Shepherd Lutheran School
Marysville, KS
Short Story
Emily, Henry, & the Catnippers
Once there was a girl named Emily, and she had a pet cat. They went to the park once, and they flew a kite. Emily flew a kite, and the cat flew a kite. Then one day the park was closed because of a big storm. The cat and Emily were sad because the park was closed.
One day they met a boy named Henry. He had a pet cat, too. Emily and her cat and the other boy decided to go to Emily’s house to fly a kite. But it became cloudy and it began to rain. So the boy and Emily had to go inside to play. They didn’t know what to play inside. But then the sun came out, and the cats ran outside.
“No!” said the boy and the girl. But then the cats ran to the park, and they got caught by some catnippers. The catnippers took them to a cage and locked them up.
Emily decided it was time for them to go outside, too, and find the cats. The searched every building in town but they couldn’t find the cats.
Then they saw another building and they had to check there. A man at the door said, “Get out! This is our apartment!”
Emily and Henry said, “You’re mean, mister, and what’s your name?”
“My name is Mr. Grumpy Pants, and I want you to leave.”
“But we are looking for two orange cats.”
“Why didn’t you say so before?”
“Because you kept saying no.”
“Well, we have two orange cats. Why don’t you come inside and look for them?”
“Sarah! Kit Kat!” said Emily and Henry. The catnippers didn’t know what was going on but then a bunch of cats arrived at the door and they all scratched the catnippers and the catnippers ran away.
Henry went home and took his cat Kit Kat. Emily and her cat went to the park and flew their kites.
The End
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